A Piece Of S.U.W (Silent Uninterrupted Writing) Part 2

Nua mai to Blog-Mania! (Welcome back in Maori!). You guessed it! Emily is here!

Thanks for that introduction Blog-Mania dude! Today I'm telling you about S.U.... you don't remember? That's ok. Scroll down....you saw it yet? Read it. Don't worry I'll wait. That's S.U.W. I have written another piece of Silent Writing which I really enjoyed writing. I'm still working on it but for now you can read my progress. The story is called 58 Metres Down and is about to girls who plunet to the bottom of the ocean...58 Metres Down. Enjoy!

• 58 Metres Down

If only I grabbed on...this is a story of me and my friend. We were dolphin swimming but then...let’s just start. I’ve already told too much.

“It’s only 1.5 metres down! It’s not like you’re going to plummet down to Bikini Bottom Ocean and order a Krabby Patty!”. The joke I always made to reassure my friends when I took them dolphin swimming.

“But what if I see a shark while I’m in the cage?” whimpered my friend, Ivory.

“Stop being a wuss. And stop acting like a baby eating a lemon. Plus the instructor is looking after us and we have heaps of air tanks in there to last us 7 days.” I told my friend.

“Well, I’m scared!”

“Ahh!” I yelled as if I was being tortured by someone playing Nickelback and making my phone go flat. “Fine!”

“Thank you!” said Ivory.

“Wuss.” I said in my head.

“Ok! Let’s hurry up and get this over and done with!” groaned Ivory.

We hopped in the cage and then….I heard a snap.

“Did you hear that?” said Ivory.

“No!” I replied quickly. The (meaning the people driving the boat) shut the lid on the cage and said,

“Good Luck!”

“What’s that supposed to mean?!?” yelled Ivory.

“Nothing.” I said. And so we looked around and noticed all different kinds of dolphins. They were beautiful! But another snap…. and this time everyone heard it.

“What was that?!?” screamed Ivory.

“Two bars have snapped!” Now I was getting scared.

“Get us out!” screeched Ivory as she was banging on the lid. Another snap!

“Hurry up!” I yelled.

“It’s stuck!” the drivers screamed out. Then all of a sudden….we fell.

There was a “metre reader” on the cage saying how many metres down we were. It kept on flicking and we couldn’t read it. Finally, we stopped on the sea bottom with a huge THUD!

“How many metres down to you think we are?” Ivory asked worried.

“58 metres down.” I replied in a light voice.

“Come to think about, that krabby patty doesn’t sound too bad!” commented Ivory sarcastically.

“Look! There’s people up there!”. yelled Ivory.

“Hey! Were down here!” I screamed out.

Of course the people didn’t hear us. We’re so deep down it would take a 500 train horns going all at once to get their attention.

The boys that were up there surfing were probably talking to each other like “Totally bro!” and “Look at this narley wave dude!”

Getting their attention would be like trying to get the Grinch to like Christmas!

They surfed away and so did our hope for surviving.

We figured out that a great White Shark snapped the bars but that first snap is still a mystery….anyway it’s final….we had fallen 58 metres down and GW were thirsty…. thirsty for blood.

“What are we going to do! What oh what!” I screamed constantly in my, head.  

“Lila, what are going to do?” said a trembling Ivory

“Wait!” I thought, my phone is waterproof! I grabbed my phone and….. No service.

“Great just great!” I said. Finally we heard something….then we saw a fin. “Ivory.” I said quietly.

“There is a great white behind you. DO not freak out.”

“Ahhhh!!!” screamed Ivory.

“So much for staying quiet!” I said under my breath.

The shark bit constantly on the cage. It was obviously dinner time. After constantly snapping away, it gave up.

The shark went away...

But not for good…

To Be Continued….

And then I wrote a Part 2...

Just swim! Just swim” I thought. But then it occurred to me that a freakin' Great White was hunting us down!

“We need to figure out what caused that first snap. It couldn't of been a shark because the cage was too high up at that point. So what could it be?” asked Ivory.

“Well let's think. I was saying stop being a wuss…”

“Which I’m still offended by!”

“Anyway! I was saying stop being a wuss and then if we fast forward the instructor said Good Luck. Maybe he actually meant something and plus when he said it, he had a smirk look on his face.”

“Ya think!” yelled Ivory.

“What if he did something to the cage?”

“But what could he of done? The cage is connected to the boat. He said he couldn’t open the lid. What if that’s it? Said Ivory

“It can’t be because all the other people on the boat tried and couldn’t do it. Even the driver tried. And the driver was a 4 year serving guard. He wouldn’t do that.” I replied.

“But what if he woul..”

“He wouldn’t! Ok!” I snapped back at Ivory.

“Wait...what way does the lid open?” asked Ivory.

“That doesn’t matter.” I responded.

“Just tell me.”

“From the top, you pull and on the inside you push.” I told her.

“What way were all of the people trying to open it?”

“Um...I think they were pushing.”

“Exactly! They all pushed instead of pulling, insuring that we would stay in. They also yelled it’s stuck...try opening the lid.”

I opened the lid...with ease.

“So it was the crew! Wait till my dad finds out about this!”

“If we even get found! But why would they do that. All of them have had over 3 years of experience and would (hopefully) never do that!” yelled Ivory.

“Just think, Just think Lila! What might of caused them to do what they did?”

“Well...my father had recently said that if he let one more person have free dolphin swimming, that he would fire him and he wouldn’t get his month's pay.” I replied.

“That’s just it. He’s probably using us as ransom. He will probably demand that he gets and raise and a promotion or something in exchange for us! Is there a tracking device or GPS on the cage?” Ivory asked.

“Yeah actually. It’s under the cage.”

“And that’s how he will find us if your father agrees to the deals.”

“Wow...so let me get this straight. Our instructor pushed on the lid ensuring we would be stuck. But the shark...maybe he threw in some bait before we went in the cage! Anyway, the shark snapped the bars connecting us to the boat making us fall 58 metres down. There is also a tracking device on the boat so he can use us as ransom. It’s either our lives...or his career. ”

“Pretty much.”

“Now I only have one question...how are we gonna get out?”

To be continued….

And I'm still working on Part 3...

Well, I hoped you enjoyed that and if you didn't read the whole thing I understand. It is looooong! Anyway, what you do it Ivory and Lila's situation? Let me know down in the comments below! Byeeeee!