Thanks for that intro Blog-Mania person! Today I'm telling you about S.U.... you don't remember...again!? That's ok. Scroll down....you saw it yet? Read it. Don't worry I'll wait. That's S.U.W. I have written Part 3 and 4 for 58 metres Down! To read part 1 and 2 scroll down to "Another Piece of Silent Writing! Part 2" and read. I'm really excited to share it with you as I have been working rather hard on these stories! You don't have to read it. It is long! Also if you a scared of sharks I recommend not reading this! Enjoy!
- Emily:C :)
- 58 Metres Down 3
“Maybe we could break the cage!” I said to Ivory.
“Oh yeah that’s a good idea! I forget that we were the Incredible Hulk!” yelled Ivory.
“We can get out easily because the lid is open but the whole reason we're down here is because of our selfish crew and of course, the shark. What do shark love to eat?” I asked.
“Us.”
“Other than that!”
“Tuna, seals, all sorts. They also have a good sense of smell.” said Ivory.
“I’ve got it! We can swim up 1-2 metres and lure the shark down. With the air tanks, we can spray them at the shark to make it shut its eyes. Then we can swim around the shark, get on top.”
“And then use the rest of the air tanks to push the shark down while we swim up. At school we swim the 50 metres all the time. But how quickly does the air come out and what is the pressure?”
“Um...I don’t know the speed but the pressure is enough for us to make the shark shut its eyes.”
“So let’s get the shark down.”
“To late….”
To Be Continued...
The last part...
- Emily:C :)
- 58 Metres Down 3
Previously on 58 Metres Down:
The shark is swimming closer and closer….to close!
It’s swimming around the cage! Oh Lord help us!
“Quick! Grab the tanks!” screamed Ivory.
“Got ‘em!” I replied.
I sprayed them up at the shark and it’s eyes were starting to shut!
“Quick swim around!” I yelled.
But… the shark stared into my soul! We were at the side of the shark and it was snapping! Snap! Snap! Each one closer than the last!
“Far out!” Ivory screamed.
All we were doing was annoying the shark! Again….snap after snap!
All we did was swim!
He swam 48 metres up and hope was lurking! But snap! Where is Ivory’s arm!
“Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!” screamed Ivory in pain.
The shark has bit her arm of!
“Help! Help!” I screamed!
The blood attracted even more sharks and things weren’t looking up.
Oww! The shark bit me! But what part? I look down in horror….where on earth is my leg!
“Fudge, fudge, fudge!” I screamed in pain.
Hope! Hope!
“Grab on!” yelled the lifeguard.
Ivory grabbed on….but I didn’t.
“Nooo!” screamed Ivory.
What she didn’t realize is that she wouldn’t see me again.
Snap! Ah! There goes my other leg. By this point I just gave up. But then in the shocking turn of events….Ivory let go of the lifeguard. She swam down, grabbed my arm and tried to race up but it was too late… the shark struck at us both with his giant jaws. Goners we were. Again...I have one more question…. Why did Ivory let go?
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